International Wikinews Writing Contest 2/log/May 28

May 28

• Cartman02au
  • Article 1
  • Approved. Ral315 (talk) 16:24, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
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• DragonFire1024
  • n:Two boys dead after their father throws them off hotel balcony
  • n:More earthquakes shake the South Pacific
  • n:Keep your eyes peeled for cosmic debris
  • Approved. Ral315 (talk) 16:24, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
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• KeithH
  • Boeing delivers final 717 to AirTran, ending Douglas era
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• n:User:PVJ59
  • Article 1
  • Article 2
  • Approved, though I need to state once again: PLEASE make your articles longer. Paragraphs should be 3-4 sentences each. Ral315 (talk) 16:24, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
    • Ral, just a note here; news style usually calls for short paragraphs, and one-sentence paragraphs aren't unusual. Two of the top stories on CNN.com tonight averaged 1.5 and 1.2 sentences per paragraph. 3-4 sentences/paragraph seems a bit much. You might be looking for more sentences overall. KeithH 07:42, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
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